Scavenger

Man I loved reading this but I really wish we had the chance to kill Sawyer at the end fuck him so much, that bastard.

Would have made the ending a lot sweeter knowing he's burning in hell for all the people he's killed. Also, lax security at RED 79 for something like that to happen, you'd think that place would at least have armed backup for being what it is with the whole "threat of neutralization" in Chapter 1. But I guess it's supposed to represent the fragility of life, even in the broken slums hidden away from the world. But at least Crom found the most important thing: people who care about him.

Well, and i can't stress it enough, damn. What rollercoaster of the plot, in a good sense. Not to mention how impressive the amount of story told in just five chapters. Great art, in both characters and full images. And of course, wonderful choice of music that helps with conveying the mood of a scene(Specially "ResuRection", i used to listen to it so long ago, it was like a hammer to the head to hear it again).

I think the only flaws were lines weren't always assigned correctly and the name of the Doberman guy (like the other guy in the comments have pointed out).  But i think that's about it.

Don't think i could've encountered this VN at a more fitting time, with the whole mood of making the best with what you have and people who care about you even with all the shitty world all around. 

Not a VN i will forget any time soon.

Well, that was certainly a unique experience. But i liked it.

Btw, dobermans name doesnt make sense, his name means chemical property, not a phisical or unliving property. So his name should be like Sobstvennost.

I noticed a bug also: sometimes dialogue confuses the guy whos talking (For example Brody saying Crom words and vice versa)

Did not expect a happy ending but maybe that's just what this story needed

Very Enjoyable! The story kept me hooked the whole way through, The characters were written in depth and with soul to them and it had a good balance of harsh reality and optimism. Loved the ending made me a bit emotional mainly because the characters were lovable. 10/10

I enjoyed it a lot :

I just finished reading the VN yesterday, and I really enjoyed it! It has a perfect balance between grim reality and a more hopeful look on what it means to have a purpose and to feel deserving of good things. The feeling of having your life stuck in a unsatifying loop is no stranger to me, so the games' message deeply resonated with me. The entire setting is incredibly dark, but it makes the (albeit scarce) sweet moments much more impactful. Still, the story is permeated with the constant feeling of being on edge, like everything can fall apart in a second, and it got me at the edge of my seat throughout the story. The art and design of the characters further enfasize the dirty aesthetic of the entire city, but I ended up loving this bunch of weird, smelly, grimy critters. Someone on a Discord server mentioned this VN, so I'm glad I gave it the chance it deserves; the chapters just flew by. I look forward to your next project! <3

wowzers, this was quite the vn to binge last night.
Honestly kinda surprised at how cleanly things just resolved.
I was half-expecting another death and POV shift, but I guess Crom's got the power of friendship actually.